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Hey Nice style!

I like your beats, and I like your intensity to keep your music on the dynamic scale.

Fresh fun and lively. Keep It Up!

Let me know if you want to collab sometime this year my goal is to make a remix and collab album over the summer season.

You got style!

and i mean it. for this to be a first track on newgrounds its much better then what i was expecting. most of the time it is one night stand project with fl that has very bad kicks and mastering.

You Have:
Very clean sounds = very important in my book
great progression and transitions.

keep it up!
and ill see you around

Dig1talDam4g3 responds:

Wow :] that review made me feel pretty good xD thanks for listening! I love reading feedback. Yea, i agree with you, sometimes the first place song isn't very deserving of its status (sorry to anyone else reading this, but that's just my honest opinion) Unfortunately I lost my first place status as of 7:06 PM :[ I guess people like to eliminate their competition :\

and I'll listen to any of your songs too, If you've posted any (if not then send me a message when you do, if you do :] )

Thanks again :D

This is your best track!

that I have heard from you so far.

mastering needs to be perfected but your direction, story and feel is all there. Transitions are beautiful.

keep it up!

and yes if you wrote this in fl studio I am willing to master it for you or start a new collab project let me know when you want to begin.

Decibel responds:

Thanks, It means a lot, The mastering doesn't need to be perfected, it just simply needs mastering because, I dunno how the hell to do it =P
The transitions were very good in my opinion and were the thing that kept me up late nighhts thinking what i should do, and it's relieving to hear someone say it.

I'd like to start a new collab project, yeah, just PM me at any time, I'm always free except f@£$% school and HW :P

Thanx again

<Deejay>

you must play this live

which is a step up.

now you just need to learn how to record yourself better or use a music program.

If you want to learn pm me

You have fun in your steps!

I like your style man keep it up cause i can picture this on a full lentgh album with your other work if it was finished and just made into epicness

Awesome work!

I give major props to people that can work togethor to write music.

I enjoy the progressions very much.

Great first attempt

Alright here you go for the constructive thoughts

alright drums need to be louder and clearer. the bass shouldnt be stomping over them but accenting them.

when you start drop the drums in with a roll to say to the listener get ready for this i have something i want you to bow too.

next when the piano comes in make it an explosion and cut the drums and introduce them very clear and dynamically then roll drums back in to the patterns you already wrote.

and have the piano cascade to a side chain along with the drums so they can still be in for ground with strong drums.

I can hear this becoming a masterpiece. any questions or help pm me anytime. been writing music for 7 years now

DjClyme responds:

wow! thx for the pointers! this will be quite helpful!

Simply ... Pro!

Send me a pm when this track is complete and I would also like to know how you built the track like what program and all that stuff.

Keep it up man!

SteakJohnson responds:

will do! final vers is almost done and thanks!

Cool Sytrus!

Your going somewhere in this track I like the sounds created and all.

But you didn't push the envelope and i think that is why the track isnt reaching stardome.

its good to see your still working on music man!

pm me sometime and we can talk.

Everlasting-Elements responds:

What do you mean by pushing the envelope?

I digg this!

You got style, neat sounds and progressions. drums kick ass.

one issue is that your melody doesn't drive the beat and the beat doesn't drive the melody. if you connect the two this track would be very tight.

if you want to talk more pm me!

I am a Teacher, a telemark skier, a longboarder and also an electronic musician. 6 years of Fl Studio experience and years in other programs too. If you want lessons on how to use Fl studio or interested in doing a project send a message.

Trevor Dericks @Being-Glass

Age 36, Male

Elementary Teacher

Champlain College

Vermont USA

Joined on 11/11/09

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