Huge Improvement!
Listen to your listeners alertg and boney man they are correct.
i turn on my sub woof to double check my studio and i got barely anything coming out it. and i thought you had some sweet verse coming in at 2:25 that could have brought in if you go on another tangent a couple new variants or verses to expand the track.
intro is right up my alley in epicness love it.
you right dnb how i wish i could. Im just to ambient to pump that energy in my style. let me know if you want to collab. ill hook you up with new techniques for fl.